Ups and Downs

Just got a call from the lovely Carol Lee Dean – sadly we did not make it into the Top 10 of the Roy W. Dean Grant… Oh, well. Greener pastures await! :^D

On the brighter side of life, I received some great feedback from http://tablereadmyscreenplay.com. Among the very helpful pointers, the reader also had to say:

“This is an interesting and inspirational story. I found it to be very well written and it certainly drew me in to the plot and had me rooting for the protagonist. The fact that it is based on a true story makes it all the more intriguing.”

“You certainly open with an exciting, visceral sequence… This is appropriately brief, well written and sets up the script perfectly.”

“I also like that you show the pain he has to deal with… [One particular scene] was harrowing and unexpected.”

“I felt like you really did some research into the field and made sure to get everything correct. The dialogue sounded natural and had good flow for the most part. Descriptions were detailed and vivid and the reader could always form a clear mental picture of what was happening on the page.”

“It a mature, clever and inspirational work and I enjoyed reading it.”

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